
“Bangalore’s crisp autumn morn,
Gradient blotted blue, dark-some gone,
Sleepy yawn, greets chirping wings.
Stoned paths riddle trimmed cushion grass,
Yellow hedges crease fruiting mass,
Shining gloss vivifies things.”
PS : My first “Cywydd Llosgyrnog“! Thanks to David and his previous post “Fate, or: Folly” , I learned this type of poetic meter. 🙏😌
Joe, it’s a lovely poem, but your rhyme scheme is a bit different than a classic “Cywydd Llosgyrnog” because the last word of the third line is supposed to rhyme with the last word of the sixth line 😀
Yours,
David
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Aaa.. missed that detail .. Let me fix it .. Thank you soo much 🙏🙏🙏
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I have fixed the mistake.. I hope it has made it better … Thanks a lot brother .. 🙏🙇♂️🤓☺️
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A delightful poem, Joe. I haven’t come across that poetic form before, although I recognised the Welsh 🙂
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Thank you Chris for the kind words. 🙂 Though I am not new to poetry, I recently have started blogging my composition, and then I came across this poetic meter.
It’s fun to do it and the poems get a good syllabic structure. 🙂
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Something I need to practice more!
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